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An event that I will always remember special with my friends is taking a road trip too Miami Beach, Florida. When my friend Carlos told me two get up at 6:00 to get ready too go too Miami in the morning, I didn't believe him. But, I packed my clothes just in case. When we made it to Miami we couldn't stop looking at all the beautiful people their. It really felt like a vacation to get away from all the back home stress. It was so cool just to be stay in that environment four a couple of days. Our luck was good, but we where pulled over by the police on our way to South Beach. That kind of killed my spirit, but I still kept my composure and we enjoyed a delicious dinner. The next morning I was feeling exhausted, and I really need a cup of coffee. I always told myself I'd go to Miami. Who new it would be so soon. It felt good being in Miami for a couple days, and I fall in love with Miami. I can't wait to go back.
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