Question

Revise the following sentences by adopting audience centered approach.

a. I think you have done a great job. I want you to know that you have surpassed this month's quota by 12 percent. I believe I can speak for the entire department by saying thank you.

b. Talech's new communication system can help meet business telecommunication needs. This new system offers multiparty extensions, call forwarding, call waiting, intercom, and call accounting.

Answer 1

Smart salespeople aren’t blind to this well-known fact: during the prospecting sales stage, email is one of the most effective ways to connect with your potential customers.