Question

Rewrite the paragraph to describe the scene and events using details from the senses.
The old man wanted to cross the road. He had wanted to get to the tea shop across the road for
nearly fifteen minutes now. But the traffic did not stop even for a second. He was tired and hungry,
and the traffic made him nervous. Then a young woman grabbed his arm, waved the traffic to stop
and helped him cross the road.​

Answer 1

Answer:

The old man wanted to cross the road and wanted to get to the tea shop across the road for nearly fifteen minutes now but the traffic did not stop for one second and hence he was tiered and hungry, and the traffic made him nervous. Then a young woman grabbed his arm, waved the traffic to stop and helped him cross the road