Question

rewrite these sentence changing the pronoun focus to best suit an essay written for
your English Composition class:
1. I find that walking is one of the best forms of exercise because it helps me lose weight
and improve my cardiovascular system while I can enjoy being outside in the fresh air.
2. One should always pay attention to the charges on one’s credit card bills in order to
identify if one’s account number has been stolen and to avoid being charged for services
one did not receive.
3. We believe that we should be able to eat healthy fruits and vegetables without our
having to pay exorbitant prices for organically grown food.
4. Your best chance of making a lot of money for retirement is to diversify your portfolio,
investing in a variety of options instead of putting all of your funds in just one account.

Answer 1

I found that walking is one of the best forms of exercise because it helps me in losing weight

and improve my cardiovascular system while I can enjoy being outside in the fresh air.

2. One should always pay attention towards the charges on one’s credit card bills in order to

identify if their account number has been stolen and to avoid being charged for service they did not receive.

3. We believe that we should be able to eat healthy fruits and vegetables without we paying exorbitant prices for organically grown food.

4. our best chance of making a lot of money for retirement is to diversify our portfolio,

investing in a variety of options instead of putting all of our funds in just one account.