Question

So great is our passion with

doing things ourselves , so we

were becoming increasingly less

dependent for specialised labour. The

balance among the two should be maintained .

Please somebody edit this passage correctly....

Answer 1

Answer:

Explanation : thank you

Answer 2

We are given a paragraph in the question and we are asked to edit the paragraph

• Let's take the sentences given in the paragraph given one by one
• The first sentence can be corrected as ' So great is our passion in '
• The second sentence can be corrected as ' doing things by ourselves, so we '
• The third sentence can be corrected as ' are becoming increasingly less '
• The fourth sentence can be corrected as ' dependent on specialized labor. The '
• The fifth sentence can be corrected as ' balance between the two should be maintained '