Question

. Spot the conjunction errors in the following passage


It was the birthday of Sudharshan. When he invited all his friends in his class only some
of them attended the function. In the function Aravinth wanted to have such chocolates
as ice-creams, But Sudharshan's mother said to Aravinth, "You can have rather chocolates
and ice-creams, Instead of that you can have peanut candy so other eatables made of cereals
therefore are good for health. While having many fun activities, games etc, they tasted the
recipe but left for their home.​

Answer 1

Answer:

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It was the birthday of Sudharshan and he invited all his friends in his class only some of them attended the function. In the function Aravinth wanted to have some chocolates and ice-creams, But Sudharshan's mother said to Aravinth, "You can have rather chocolates or ice-creams, Instead of that you can have peanut candy or other eatables made of cereals

therefore they are good for health. While having many fun activities, games etc, they tasted the

recipe but left for their home.

Explanation:

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Answer 2

Answer:

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