Question

story on it was dark when we got down from the train. As u walked ahead

Answer 1

As I walked ahead I subconsciously looked around to check if all my friends had safely got down from the train.After checking that our luggage were secured we all proceeds towards the help counter on the station.I and my friends had been waiting for this trip for long time since we rarely get to spend time with each other and this trip was the perfect excuse to get together and which is why the level of excitement that was flowing on our heart was almost crazy.so with smiling face we approached the man sitting on the cpunter.Jake who was the most mature among us asked the grumpy looking man the address of a nearby hotel.Inspight of the lamplight's on the station the station was still looking dark so when we were moving out of the station I collided with a body and fell down on the ground.With the help of my friends I stood up and apologized to the man with whom I collided.But to my utter dissappoinent thean just brushed pass me as if I was a thin air.

sorry if this failed ur expectation but I write my stories in first person view.