English, asked by TANU81, 1 year ago

---Story Writing ---

While travelling in a train , you met a train driver and had an interesting chat with him. Write a story on the basics of the clues given.(150- 200 words )

I was travelling in a train -- talk with an old man, once an engine driver --the old man(Rajpal) revealed his secret -- could not stop the train --over bridge -- a young man --got killed --felt guilty --request

#write a simple story concluded some message also.

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Answered by Anonymous
24

Hey Tanu ,,



Here is a story



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Last morning I woke up the sun rays hit my face . Than , I remember one thing that I've to catch train and go to office at time . Cause , Today my boss will give me promotion. So in hurry I got ready and go at station to catch the train . By my good fate i caught the train at time , as I was traveling in the train watching through the window and staring at the nature and enjoying that moment .



After that i listen the voice of tugging of a little son with his mother he obstinate his mother that he want to sit on the window seat as I was listening all of this than , I look behind and saw that a lady was stood with a child in her lap. But no one giving him seat for sat down than I stood and give her my seat and , that boy got happy as I gave him my window seat for what he is tugging to his mother . Than , I started walking one compartment to next compartment of the train in hope of getting seat but the whole train was full with peoples .



Lastly, i approached at the engine of the train where the driver drives the train . I was watching all thing how that loco pilot driving the train . Then , he look back stare me for a while . Than again turn ahead and said to me you may come in.


I walked inside the engine compartment than sit just along with the driver . He was an old man and driving the train but he seems to be little nervous than I started talking with that old man . He talked to me very friendly as it see to be that he was hiding something from me . He make me his friend .



Than , lastly the old man ( Rajpal ) revealed his secret to me that he could not stop the train . I stunned after hearing his voice . Than after a little span of time the train was about to crossing the bridge where a person tried to crossing the bridge  as driver said to me he can't control the train . The overlapped on that man and that young man got killed .


Driver ( Rajpal ) of the train felt guilt for his deed . than , he pray to god ' please god forgive me ' that I've killed a innocent young guy today . Than he said to me only you have seen this whole incident please don't tell to anyone when we reached at station . He request me a lot than I think for a while and take decision that I'll not tell to anyone about this incident cause he had not done it on his own . but done mistake . Than I said promise me that you will met with parent of they young fellow and try to give them sympathy . Than he promised me and I move on to the next station .



Conclusion- Be serious to your job Every time , everywhere  and do your work with full responsibility .



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Hope it helped



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Anonymous: sorry give me a chance to edit
Anonymous: dont report it please @tanu81
GAGNPREET: OK
HappiestWriter012: Good one! But capitalization of first letter of each sentence, would made answer look more good
TANU81: Yeah :)
Anonymous: oo ,,, ill do this
MohdShaharyar: Story is always written in past tense. Your story is good but according to tense your story is wrong.
Anonymous: whats wrong ?
MohdShaharyar: Find your mistake. I will't tell you. This is your responsibilities.
Answered by BrainlySmile
25

Answer-    Story Writing

                                      The Guilt

I was travelling in a train to Delhi as I had to attend my cousin's wedding. I was very excited as I was going to meet my relatives after a long time.

While I was travelling, I met with an old man sitting next to me. He seemed to be an octagenarian with bald head and frail and shivering body. I talked with the old man who narrated his story. He said, ''My name is Rajpal and I'm from Haryana. I was once an engine driver.'' I listened to him keenly. He decided to reveal his secret and continued, ''When I was an engine driver, one day, I couldn't stop the speeding train just because I felt sleepy. Eventually, it crossed over the bridge and a young man got killed by being charred to the death due to the speeding tain. It was really depressing and so foolish of me and to save myself from being caught, I ran away.'' The old man had tears in his his eyes as he realised his guilt. So, did I. Rajpal requested me not to tell anyone about this mistake of his. Before I could say anything, the old man passed away with regret in his eyes and heart. It was a very heart-breaking moment. By that time, I had reached Delhi but learnt a big lesson too.


Conclusion- Our one mistake can change an innocent person's life. All we need to do is doing things responsibly and trying to avoid mistakes.

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