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India get its freedom from the British rule on 15th August, 1957. We celebrated our Independence Day on 15th of August every year. This was a national holiday in our country. We all knew that freedom come to us at a heavy cost. It is taking years of efforts and sacrifices by our freedom fighters before we taste the fruit of freedom. We Indians observed the Independence
Day with great enthusiasm. School children took out colourful processions sing the glory of India.​

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India got its freedom from the British rule on 15th August, 1957. We celebrate our Independence Day on 15th of August every year. This is a national holiday in our country. We all know that freedom came to us at a heavy cost. It took years of efforts and sacrifices by our freedom fighters before we taste the fruit of freedom. We Indians observed the Independence Day with great enthusiasm. School children take out colourful processions sing the glory of India.