The exhausted earth groan and quivered under the glare of the Sun. Spirals of heat Rose from the the ground on if from molten lava . The lizard crowd in the rock in search of a shady crevice. There seemed no respite in heat. can anyone tell me the correction and errors in this paragraph.
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Remove the double the.
Remove the space between lava and the period.
And in the last word write the heat.
The corrected paragraph is in the explaination section.
Explanation:
The exhausted earth groan and quivered under the glare of the Sun. Spirals of heat Rose from the ground on if from molten lava. The lizard crowd in the rock in search of a shady crevice. There seemed no respite in the heat.
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The exhausted earth groaned and quivered under the glare of the Sun. Spirals of heat Rose from the ground as if from molten lava. the lizard crowd on the rock in search of a shady crevice. There seemed no respite of heat.
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- change the tense to past
- phrases like on, in, of, if, above....etc
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