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"It have been a long time since I met an adviser, And hence I want to look at my financials now. I want you to review my investments and insurances and advised weather I have
appropriate products and strategies in place or I need to make any changes. I feel that the returns generated by my investments are lower then the returns generated by comparable benchmarks and investments. I want you to look into it as well. Further, I am also concerned about the cost charge by my investment providers. I want to see if there is a more cost effective option available."
"I have not review my insurances in long time and want you to check if my current insurances are adequate for my needs. I also want cost effective insurances as currently I am paying very high cost for my insurances. I want the advice fees to be pay from my investments and as commission from insurances and did not want to pay it from my bank account. If you confirm that you are able to take care of all the points than only we will proceed further."
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"It has been a long time since I met an adviser, And hence I want to look at my financials now. I want you to review my investments and insurances and advised whether I have
appropriate products and strategies in place, or I need to make any changes. I feel that the returns generated by my investments are lower than the returns generated by comparable benchmarks and investments. I want you to look into it as well. Further, I am also concerned about the cost charge by my investment providers. I want to see if there is a more cost-effective option available."
"I have not reviewed my insurances in a long time and want you to check if my current insurances are adequate for my needs. I also want cost-effective insurances as currently, I am paying a very high cost for my insurances. I want the advice fees to be pay from my investments and as commission from insurances and did not want to pay it from my bank account. If you confirm that you are able to take care of all the points, then only we will proceed further."