Question

The following paragraph has not been edited
having finished college and than
a shorthand course, I was hiring as
secretary on the editor of a
magazine. Now I had an job and
an apartment in Delhi. It has a heaven
for a women by a small town ​

Answer 1

The edited words are underlined.

Having finished college and then  

a shorthand course, I was hired as  

secretary by the editor of a  

magazine. Now I had a job and  

an apartment in Delhi. It was a heaven  

for a woman from a small town.​

Answer 2

Answer:

The continuation for the given paragraph would be:

Getting to experience this new life away from my routine days is bliss to me and I feel so happy about the way in which I am independent and readily helping people around me.

I thank Allah for all these opportunities and of course my family, without whom I wouldn't have got this freedom and success.