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The following passage contains 10 mistakes, such as grammatical errors, wrong prepositions and conjunctions. Correct the mistakes and rewrite the correct version of this passage. Haziq is a 27-year-old engineer. He (1) never knows his parents. He was raised in an orphanage in Kuala Perlis. His parents (2) are sending him to the orphanage when he was three years old, as they were too poor to give him proper care. He was brought up with other orphans who he fondly (3) considering as his siblings. He won a scholarship to study engineering at the University of Cambridge. In London, he (4) is attending a course in genealogy which sparked his interest to find his parents. He vowed he would track his parents (5) yet he wants to know more about himself. When he (6) had returned to Malaysia in 2009, he went back to the orphanage and started his journey of looking for his parents. He empathised with other people who (7) are looking for their long-lost relatives. This is the reason why he started his new company called Reunited - to reconnect people with their lost loved ones. He believes a lot of people (8) are interested in reconnecting with their past. Reunited has been successful in reuniting clients with their loved ones. However, Haziq is still searching for his parents. He (9) knew his journey will not be an easy one and he may end up at a dead end. Nevertheless, he (10) has determined to keep tracking his parents and will not give up easily.

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Answered by marieya
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Haziq is a 27-year-old engineer. He never knew his parents. He was raised in an orphanage in Kuala Perlis. His parents sent him to the orphanage when he was three years old, as they were too poor to give him proper care. He was brought up with other orphans who he fondly considered as his siblings. He won a scholarship to study engineering at the University of Cambridge. In London, he attended a course in genealogy which sparked his interest to find his parents. He vowed he would track his parents because he wants to know more about himself. When he has returned to Malaysia in 2009, he went back to the orphanage and started his journey of looking for his parents. He empathised with people who were looking for their for their long-lost relatives. This is the reason why he started his new company called Reunited - to reconnect people with their lost loved ones. He believes a lot of people were interested in reconnecting with their past. Reunited has been successful in reuniting clients with their loved ones. However, Haziq is still searching for his parents. He knows his journey will not be an easy one and he may end up at a dead end. Nevertheless, he is determined to keep tracking his parents and will not give up easily.

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