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THE HARD-EARNED JOYS ARE THE SWEETEST. WITH HARDWORK, DETERMINATION AND CONFIDENCE WE CAN ACHEIVE ANYTHING IN OUR LIFE EVEN WE CAN BE SUCCESSFUL IN THE MOST DIFFICULT DREAMS IN OUR LIFE WITH THIS. WE HAVE TO FOCUS ON OUR GOALS, OUR AIMS AND DEFINETELY WE WILL SUCCESFUL. I WAS A KID I DIDN’T KNEW ALL THESE THINGS MAYBE AROUND 11 YEARS OLD. I WAS GIVEN A PROJECT TO COMPLETE WITHIN A WEEK. IT WAS A SCHOOL PROJECT WHICH COULD WIN OUR SCHOOL IF THE PROJECT IS SUBMITTED ON TIME. MANY OTHER SCHOOLS WERE ALSO PARTICIPATING I WAS VERY EXCITED. MY TEACHERS TOLD THAT YOU HAVE TO COMPLETE YOUR PROJECT AT ANY COST. I THOUGHT ITS EASY TO GO ON I WILL DO THAT SLOWLY. I WAS LIKE CHILL AND RELAXING. WHEN MY PARENTS ASKED ME ABOUT THE PROJECT I TOLD I AM STILL WORKING ON IT. I SAW THE THINGS WHICH WERE TO BE DONE. I KEPT READING ABOUT THE PROJECT WHAT WE HAVE TO DO, HOW WE HAVE TO DO, ETC. I WAS TENSED WHEN I SAW THE TOPICS OF THE PROJECT IT WAS A VERY DIFFICULT TASK. I WAS TENSED, I COULDN’T SLEEP ALL NIGHT. I WENT TO MY GRANDMOTHER HOPING THAT SHE WOULD HELP ME. SHE ASKED ME WHAT HAPPENED . I TOLD HER MY PROBLEMS. SHE CALMED ME AND TOLD ME THAT IN ANY OF THE WORK HARDWORK, DETERMINATION AND CONFIDENCE IS NEEDED TO BE SUCCESFUL. WE HAVE TO BE OVERCONFIDENT. THE SCIENTISTS AND OTHER GREAT MEN ARE SUCCESFUL BECAUSE OF THEIR HARDWORK, DETERMINATION AND SKILLS. THIS OPENED MY EYES. STILL TWO DAYS WERE LEFT FOR THE THE PROJECT TO BE SUBMITTED I SET ON WORK AND WORKED DAY NIGHT AND DIDN’T SLEPT THOSE DAYS, A SMALL PART OF THE PROJECT WAS LEFT IT WAS 12:00AM I WORKED FOR ANOTHER FEW HOURS. MY PROJECT WAS COMPLETED AT 2:30 AM. I WENT TO SCHOOL AND SUBMITTED MY PROJECT. THE RESULTS WERE OUT. WE WERE SHOCKED ON LISTENING THAT OUR SCHOOL HAS WON THE PROJECT OUR SCHOOL RECIEVED A TROPHY AND A CERTIFICATE. I WAS VERY- VERY HAPPY. THE SCHOOL WAS VERY PROUD OF ME. THIS IS HOW HARDWORK, DETERMINATION AND CONFIDENCE WILL HELP YOU GET THROGH ANY DIFFICULT TASK. THIS IS A ESSAY OF HOW YOU ACCOMPLISHED A DIFFICULT TASK WITH HARDWORK,DETERMINATION AND CONFIDENCE. TELL ME HOW IT IS..WHAT CHANGES I HAVE TO MAKE AND TELL ME THE CORRECT SENTENCE OR PARAGRAPH..FAST

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