Question

There are 4 errors in the following paragraph. Identify the errors and rewrite the correct paragraph.

I went to the pool then no one was there. The place being quite. A water was still and tiled bottom was so white and clean as a bathtub. I was timid about going in alone. ​

Answer 1

Then is wrong in first line correct is when

In second line line tiled is wrong correct is till

in second line was is missing before being

Answer 2

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Answer:

1)

error: Then

Correction : when

2)

error : Being

Correction : Was

3)

error: A ( Water)

correction : The

4)

error : So ( white)

correction : As

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$\bf{ \color{blue} \: paragraph \: correctly \: written}$

I went to the pool when no one was there. The place was quiet. The Water was still and tiled bottom was as white and clean as a bathtub. I was timid about going in alone.

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