Question

there has been accident when he went hiking with his father and brother Indar they were crossing a bridge which was old the following paragraph has to errors edit the paragraph and rewrite it​

Answer 1

There had been an accident when he went hiking with his father and brother Inder. They were crossing a bridge which was old.

Answer 2

There had been an accident when he and his brother Indar and his father while they were crossing an old bridge.

This is the right sentence as it changes with respect to the correct sentence formation to give same meaning.

It includes mini statements and thus carries out his father and brother there they were crossing a bridge. They had an incident and good to denote changes.