Question

There was a bomb explosion in your train share your experience

Answer 1

your answer is here:
it was 1:53 pm i was travelling in train . all were sleeping  . but suddenly one lady started shouting  (bb!bo!bomb!bomb!).i thought that anybody was watching movie . i sleep again suddenly my mom entered and started shouting bomb !bomb ,there is bomb in next block . i was  making mother to be relaxed i was saying mom plz relaxe!relaxe!take long breath  

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