Question

There were 3 friends James, Alex and jack and they go for trekking in the mountains as an adventure and hear noises form the back ( twig snap, roar etc.) when they looked back they saw that a bear was behind them. They wanted to run but they have learnt in one of their classes that if you'll run in front of a wild bear it will not help but will be more dangerous so they kept their pace slow. James and Alex reached near a camp and told everything about the bear and asked the residents of the camp to save them. While jack was very scared and tried to climb the nearest tree to protect himself. The bear came much closer to him and jack was screaming on the inside. The residents came out and saw the tree and laughed a lot. They told the 3 friends that bears often come here to suck the nectar of these flower as they are rich in it. The boys now had another interesting story to tell their classmates about and another great adventure too.




Need to improve this story. The starting and ending and correct grammatical mistakes

Answer 1

hey there
see the highlighted part with yellow color
it will be they heard and in the place of form. it will be from
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