Question

This is my leave application..
I wrote it...
pls tell me it has mistake or not..

if it has mistake, kindly correct it..

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Subject: Regarding to stay in the hostel

Respected sir/madam,

To say with compliments that I am Shivani Somani. I stay in your hostel. I had much difficulties in my study. And therefore I had applied to leave the hostel. But now I am convenient with my study. So that I decided to stay here.

Thank you

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Answer 1

ok from my opinion it is correct

Answer 2

after thank you write yours sincerely