Question

This is MY SELF COMPOSED poem, but still am not satisfy. I need proper writing methods related to rhyming scheme, language and the words,
NOTE : if am not satisfy with your answer , it will be reported.

Answer 1

okay so the poem is a teaching about life what is life and what we need to be successful and many more. I think the rhyme scheme abab abab cdcd abcd cdab abab and abcd. the words chosen are excellent and fits to the theme of this poem. The words used for rhyming are simple and its makes the poem simple therefore it is easy to understand. I think..... YOU DID A GREAT JOB

Answer 2

Answer:

Achha likhte ho ✌️

Ab to krde yrr ek brr! Last bs