Question

what can i add to make a new paragraph about a girl rain who find out her parent are divorcing


Rain had always looked different from the rest of her family. Her mother had light blue ocean eyes with blond hair that beamed like the sun, her brother had light brown eyes with brown hair as soft as a pillow and her father with alluring dark brown eyes and golden hair. Feeling like an outsider, Rain had always envied her family’s looks,She was not physically gifted like the rest of her family. But her personality was magnetic, she had that X factor that people used to get attracted towards her.It's hard to explain it in words but there's something really different about her.

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You can add her overhearing the divorce plan. You can also add her feelings after hearing the plan. Make sure you bring back her fond memories of her parents and times which she treasures. In simple words exaggerate a lot on the feelings. End with a cliffhanger. Hope this helps.