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Rain had always looked different from the rest of her family. Her mother had light blue ocean eyes with blond hair that beamed like the sun, her brother had light brown eyes with brown hair as soft as a pillow and her father with beautiful dark brown eyes and golden hair.
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Rain was not like them. She may not be physical gifted like the rest of her family. But her personality was magnetic, she had that X factor that people used to get attracted towards her. She was one of the most popular girls in her school. It's hard to explain it in words but there's something really different about her, her aura, her smile, she was not fake like every other person. Maybe she was too real for this world.
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