Question

When the roar inside of you,
don't scream as loud as you want it to.
When your eyes don't shed your tears.
And they always show your fears.
And when you're too strong,
Want to fall back on ground
But your mood always like a dull song.

tell me if the above piece of poetry has any grammatical mistakes.

Answer 1

u wrote vary well and good . there is no . mark me brainliest if u r a genius

Answer 2

last line must be
But your mood is always like a dull song
I hope it will help