When we mention summer , we think directly about the holiday , because we get a two month-long break from school during the hottest time of the year . I get enough free time to do many interesting activities and develop my hobbies such as improving my drawing and reading skills . At the beginning of my summer holiday my parents planned to a nice holiday for the family . We always go to interesting places and learn many new things . During our summer vacation we have visited Egypt, I went there many times and every time I learn a lot of new things and have a lot of fun , we started the tripe in a plane , and it was very cold . Although I felt tired after two hours . But when we got there the hot weather made me excited again , it took us 5 hours to get there . After we put our luggage in the hotel We went to visit the pyramids , While we where toured the local places we tried many delicious local food like Koshari ,and buy the local spices for using them at home ,and people were very kind there. We went to the Cairo museum and I saw the mummies It was a little bit scary . I took a lot of photographs of the artifacts in the Cairo museum, and also I took a lot of photographs of the local people in the different places we have visited . I have a really worthy photographs collection that I have taken in the many visits we have made during my summer vacation . We also slept over with our grandparents in Alexandria . When I got back from my trip , I told everyone how amazing and interesting my trip was . I always look towards to my summer vacation as it is very enjoyable. Please help me correct this essay. Thank you
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When we mention summer, we think directly about the holiday, because we get a two-month-long break from school during the hottest time of the year. I get enough free time to do many interesting activities and develop my hobbies such as improving my drawing and reading skills. At the beginning of my summer holiday, my parents planned a nice holiday for the family. We always go to interesting places and learn many new things. During our summer vacation, we have visited Egypt, I went there many times and every time I learn a lot of new things and have a lot of fun, we started the trip in a plane, and it was very cold. Although I felt tired after two hours. But when we got there the hot weather made me excited again, it took us 5 hours to get there. After we put our luggage in the hotel We went to visit the pyramids, While we were toured the local places we tried many delicious lo
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