Question

Which revision best uses dialogue to improve the sentence? I told them how surprised and excited I was to have my painting selected, especially since I’d felt so incompetent at the beginning and I knew the competition was so ruthless.

Answer 1

we can add thee, thou, and other words like which make the sentence more complex and beautiful.

eg instead of prostitute you can use harlot.

im sorry but its just a example,

Answer 2

Answer :

Cambridge English Dictionary defines 'dialogue' as ' conversation between the characters in a story, such as in a book or movie.'

The following revision best uses dialogue to improve the given sentence :

“Yup, it was a big surprise,” I told them. “I’m excited that my painting was selected! Especially since I felt so incompetent at the beginning and the competition was so ruthless.”