Question

while going to school you noticed a grandfather teaching his grandson to plant trees. After looking at this how did you feel. Write a diary entry describing your experience​

Answer 1

Explanation:

After reading the book/watching the film, write a diary entry for Charlie (or one of the other characters: Augustus Gloop, Veruca Salt, Mike Teavee or Violet Beauregarde) about their visit to the Chocolate factory.

Remember to:

- start your entry 'Dear diary,'

- write in paragraphs (with 6-8 sentences per paragraph)

- write as the character (using I not their name or he/she)

- write in the past tense (watched, ate, played, visited)

- describe not only what you saw but also what you felt

- use lots of adjectives (describing words) and similes (as ___ as a ____) (____like ____)

- use neat joined up handwriting

- use a variety of punctuation

- use capital letters at the start of sentences and for proper nouns

- proof read and improve your work once finished

Challenge

Keep your own diary and write in it at the end of the day about what has happened that day.

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Answer 2

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• start your entry 'Dear diary,'
• write in paragraphs (with 6-8 sentences per paragraph) - write as the character (using I not their name or he/she)
• write in the past tense (watched, ate, played, visited)
• describe not only what you saw but also what you felt
• use lots of adjectives (describing words) and similes (as __ as a __) (__like __)
• use neat joined up handwriting
• use a variety of punctuation
• use capital letters at the start of sentences and for proper nouns - proof read and improve your work once finished.

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Dear diary 9:30 p.m

Saturday

Today morning when I was going to school, I saw a grandfather and his grandson. They were talking about nature, plants and trees. The grandfather was telling his grandson to plant more and more trees, because of there importance in our life, He also tell him that trees helps us in breathing, they gives us food, shelter, shadow, clean air and many other specialities about trees. They both planting 2 trees on his grandson's birthday. I felt very good after seeing them, I had also planted 1 tree in my garden and from now onwards, I will prescribe another people also to plant trees.

Thanking you

shriya (write your name)

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