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write a essay on my planet my place in 1000 words?​

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Answered by Anonymous
15

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The Earth is a relatively small celestial object. It is the third planet orbiting an average star, our Sun, located in the Orion arm, sometimes called the Orion Spur; it is a minor arm located in between the Sagittarius Arm and the Perseus arm of the Milky Way, a barred spiral galaxy. Our solar system orbits the central bulge of our galaxy at a radius of 1.7 billion AU and our period of galactic revolution is 230 million years at a tangential velocity of 828,000 km/hr relative to the center. Our solar system has one main sequence star, 4 inner rocky planets, the asteroid belt, 4 outer large gaseous planets, the Kuiper Belt of small icy objects, and the outermost Oort Cloud of icy objects made of water, ammonia, and methane.

The supernova process generates elements more massive than iron, like the heavier elements we find within our solar system, and ejects them. With a cloud of about 90% H, 9% He, and small amounts of everything else, such as iron, carbon, and oxygen, and the movement of pressure waves through the cloud due to the At the center of this contracting and rotating cloud, compressed H and He gases formed a hot protostar. When temperature and pressure within the core of this protostar increased to a critical point, a type of nuclear fusion, also called proton-proton fusion, began, and thus our sun was born. At the same time, the remaining gas cloud that had enough inertia to avoid being swept into the Sun collapsed into the form of a rotating sphere. According to the Condensation theory, the first solid particles formed and then grew as they accreted the surrounding material. Soon, these larger bodies, called planetesimals, had enough gravity to pull in more matter. The planetesimals then collided to form the planets. The inner planets formed at temperatures high enough that only heavier elements could form solids, so these planets are composed of rock and metal. The lighter gaseous elements were swept outward by solarwinds. The Earth then began as an accreting molten sphere. The Earth’s thermal energy came from an initial stage of nuclear fission at its center.

Answered by xXitzMissUniqueXx
5

Explanation:

This is a great topic - my respect to the educator who came up with it, because it can mean whatever you choose it to mean. How you choose to handle this wide open title is part of what the marker will be judging. It is up to you to make a convincing argument of however you choose to do this, and that signals a kind of maturity of thinking as well as mastery of the skill of constructing an essay. So don’t panic, let’s use this as a learning experience.

First, the title could mean many things, but it suggests something about your identity in a context. We do not live in a vacuum, we live in a social context, an environmental context, an economic, or geographic, or personal context - we cannot divorce ourselves from those.

Furthermore, there is no other context for us; there is not some other, nicer planet, such as in Avatar, which we might prefer. There is not some other type of beings - like in some on-line game - that we might feel are more interesting than the people we move among every day. There is just us.

Now you cannot cover all of this in an essay, so the idea is to take one aspect of it and make a good job of it. I suggest you make a spidergram or list of all the aspects of your personal social context -you, in your plantary place - and pick one.

Use a shape; you can start with a wide overview and narrow it down to one key aspect, or start with one key aspect and broaden it out to a wider view. Either will do. In that overview you can briefly show that you understand the wider situation.

Use a structure: I suggest this:

Tell ’em what you’re going to tell ‘em;

then tel l’em;

then tell ’em what you told them.

(‘em = them - its an old teacher’s saying)

This equates to: Introduction, Exposition (the main content,) Conclusion.

You start by saying what you are going to do in the essay e.g. the shape of it (Introduction). Say why it is important or interesting. Say why it is important or interesting to you. Say what you hope to achieve in the essay - then do that.

The main content (Exposition) needs only to make a few key points - 3 or 4 - about what you have decided is the heart of your essay. Try and use a bit of critical analysis - say why something is a good idea or a poor idea, and why, and then decide what is your opinion and what advice about it you would give to a reader.

In the Conclusion, give the reader a recap- you will have been working on this for a while, but it is still new to the reader, and they can benefit from being reminded just what the essay is about. You might want to suggest ways forward, or you might not, depending on whether that is relevant to your essay.

One last thing - it demonstrates your skills in thinking and writing better if you take a small point and explore it in depth, rather than taking a wide but shallow view. This is basic stuff that is relevant for any writing. You want a marker to see that you can think deeply and write thoughtfully, but this topic could go very deep, so be careful to keep it under control -make it about things you know and understand or can find out about - do not venture too far into unanswerable questions!

I never knew any of this in school; I wish I had- I learned it through tutoring others. Please, though, check your essay plans with your teacher or tutor, I would not like you to do all this and then find out it was the wrong approach! Best wishes for your assignment, I hope you enjoy it.

xXitzMissUniqueXx

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