Write a good story with the following beginning ;
I was sitting in the balcony with a hot cup of coffee and went down memory lane….
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The Lost Memories
I was sitting in the balcony with a hot cup of coffee and went down the memory lane. All the memories flushed back into my mind. I remembered how I used to buy toys amd goodies from the street vendors. But now, after a leap of 40 long years, the same roads are so much deserted. People are so busy with their 'smart' phones that they've really forgotten what's actually 'smart' for them.
I often wait for my daughter to come, sit on my lap and ask me to read her stories which I always did on typical rainy days. But that never happens. Maybe she's busy tagging her friends on facebook. #FunInTheRain. But do they really enjoy it? I don't know. I'm too old to judge them.
I sipped my coffe patiently. There was a time when all the children in the neighbourhood would come and dance together in the rain. It was hilarious. Nowadays even the crows are difficult to spot, keeping aside children. Parents are much more strict than they were before. I can't help it, even I am. The fear of them getting ill in the rain continue to haunt us. But earlier that never happened. Is it the rain which has changed or is it us?
I took my last sip from that cup. It was time for work again. Perhaps I'll continue dreaming some other time.
Thank you!
The Lost Memories
I was sitting in the balcony with a hot cup of coffee and went down the memory lane. All the memories flushed back into my mind. I remembered how I used to buy toys amd goodies from the street vendors. But now, after a leap of 40 long years, the same roads are so much deserted. People are so busy with their 'smart' phones that they've really forgotten what's actually 'smart' for them.
I often wait for my daughter to come, sit on my lap and ask me to read her stories which I always did on typical rainy days. But that never happens. Maybe she's busy tagging her friends on facebook. #FunInTheRain. But do they really enjoy it? I don't know. I'm too old to judge them.
I sipped my coffe patiently. There was a time when all the children in the neighbourhood would come and dance together in the rain. It was hilarious. Nowadays even the crows are difficult to spot, keeping aside children. Parents are much more strict than they were before. I can't help it, even I am. The fear of them getting ill in the rain continue to haunt us. But earlier that never happened. Is it the rain which has changed or is it us?
I took my last sip from that cup. It was time for work again. Perhaps I'll continue dreaming some other time.
Thank you!
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So here is Your Story Friend,
☆☆☆☆☆Lack of Mercy from God☆☆☆☆☆☆
Like Everyday i was sitting with a hot cup of tea and went down the memory lane and lost myself there. What had happened with me and my wife? Cannot be imagine by anyone. Altough i have crossed 60 and very few years left for me. But i have to live for my wife. Till her death because noone is here to support her otherthan me.
"Spring is going and that will also passed like every year for me and nothing has changed.
My tears has frezed after suffering from such situations." - I was thinking such lines and lost myself in memorylane.
Suddenly i saw someone coming towards my house; u stratle he was just looking like him. How God gifted same face to two different persons?
Suddenly my Wife ran and welcome the person.She was very happy as She thougt that her son- in law returned. But that man was Feeling strange to us. My Wife welcomed him with a cup of Tea and asked him "Have you remember my son ; How much tea spoon of sugar i adds in my tea? , I know you have forgotten Look! i have remembered....".
But however He was not Rahul, my son in law but similar man. He stand silently without any word.
She continued- "Wait Son! I am going to prepare your favourite stew for you dear " and moved towards the kitchen.
Now i sat near the Gentleman and asked about him ; He told that He was John a buisness man said, "I came this house only for asking Mr.Samwent Address but that Lady hold his hand and rushed in this house. I donot know what is going on ?"
I listein these things but Sit silently and lost myself till he again called me. I started "Dear Gentleman I was a Professor at research Centre but in that period a an great turning in my life happened." I again paused.
And after a while a continued - " I lost my only daughter named Monika in an train Accident.
Actually she was going to research in Science with his childhood Friend Rahul , who would marry my daughter. But it was not in her luck.
God was not enough Mercy to let their life to settle."
"After the train accident , Rahul never came to our house and why he will come? "- I again stopped and think a while. I continued -" When my Wife listein this news , She lose her sense and memory of that period and became mentally abnormal.Now she is thinking that her daughter and Son in law will return again.
However your Face is similar to that my Rahul so this Misunderstanding happened"- I paused and look the gentleman as if i want something from him .
John asked me if he can do anything for us .I requested him to act as if he is kur Rahul. Altough he hesitate but after my request; He aggred.
My Wife entered the room again with stew. The gentleman had had the stew. And took permission from her for leaving.My wife lost her smile and told -"I know you are busy son. So you please leave.But when you are completing the research and returning with my daughter? I have waitted a lot and take this gift for her."
My wife hand over a gift to the gentleman and he left. When he was going there is a love and affection for us was reflecting from him.As if he was telling "Really God has no mercy for these two helpless Souls."
Again my life continued in that Balcony with a cup of coffee . Waiting to left this World.
》Moral
There is prosperity and humanity in every human. Even a stranger can act like your Son.
Life is full of herdles and we have to face it.
☆☆☆ HOPE THIS HELPS YOU A LOT ☺☆
☆☆☆☆☆Lack of Mercy from God☆☆☆☆☆☆
Like Everyday i was sitting with a hot cup of tea and went down the memory lane and lost myself there. What had happened with me and my wife? Cannot be imagine by anyone. Altough i have crossed 60 and very few years left for me. But i have to live for my wife. Till her death because noone is here to support her otherthan me.
"Spring is going and that will also passed like every year for me and nothing has changed.
My tears has frezed after suffering from such situations." - I was thinking such lines and lost myself in memorylane.
Suddenly i saw someone coming towards my house; u stratle he was just looking like him. How God gifted same face to two different persons?
Suddenly my Wife ran and welcome the person.She was very happy as She thougt that her son- in law returned. But that man was Feeling strange to us. My Wife welcomed him with a cup of Tea and asked him "Have you remember my son ; How much tea spoon of sugar i adds in my tea? , I know you have forgotten Look! i have remembered....".
But however He was not Rahul, my son in law but similar man. He stand silently without any word.
She continued- "Wait Son! I am going to prepare your favourite stew for you dear " and moved towards the kitchen.
Now i sat near the Gentleman and asked about him ; He told that He was John a buisness man said, "I came this house only for asking Mr.Samwent Address but that Lady hold his hand and rushed in this house. I donot know what is going on ?"
I listein these things but Sit silently and lost myself till he again called me. I started "Dear Gentleman I was a Professor at research Centre but in that period a an great turning in my life happened." I again paused.
And after a while a continued - " I lost my only daughter named Monika in an train Accident.
Actually she was going to research in Science with his childhood Friend Rahul , who would marry my daughter. But it was not in her luck.
God was not enough Mercy to let their life to settle."
"After the train accident , Rahul never came to our house and why he will come? "- I again stopped and think a while. I continued -" When my Wife listein this news , She lose her sense and memory of that period and became mentally abnormal.Now she is thinking that her daughter and Son in law will return again.
However your Face is similar to that my Rahul so this Misunderstanding happened"- I paused and look the gentleman as if i want something from him .
John asked me if he can do anything for us .I requested him to act as if he is kur Rahul. Altough he hesitate but after my request; He aggred.
My Wife entered the room again with stew. The gentleman had had the stew. And took permission from her for leaving.My wife lost her smile and told -"I know you are busy son. So you please leave.But when you are completing the research and returning with my daughter? I have waitted a lot and take this gift for her."
My wife hand over a gift to the gentleman and he left. When he was going there is a love and affection for us was reflecting from him.As if he was telling "Really God has no mercy for these two helpless Souls."
Again my life continued in that Balcony with a cup of coffee . Waiting to left this World.
》Moral
There is prosperity and humanity in every human. Even a stranger can act like your Son.
Life is full of herdles and we have to face it.
☆☆☆ HOPE THIS HELPS YOU A LOT ☺☆
DaIncredible:
great story =D
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