English, asked by akku11, 1 year ago

Write a long metaphorical poem about 'LIFE'. [Minimum : 20 lines] ☺

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Answered by GovindKrishnan
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                                                    The Sail-Ship of Life...

I lonely stand as a voyager on this sail-ship

Travelling to reach my destination !

It’s a journey not in my control!

Driven by the wind against my will!

Sometimes it takes me through the calm oceans

Sometimes I tackle the destructive storms !

Often, I meet some voyagers on my go!

But none accompanies me eternally

As all have their own aspirations!

Wind forces me to take the lengthy perilous paths

By impeding the shortcuts to my destination!

I lonely stand as a voyager on this sail-ship

Travelling to reach my destination!

I’m just a beginner in this voyage!

My destination is half a trillion miles away!

I must overshoot the eternal seas, till the end of my voyage!

I lonely stand as a voyager on this sail-ship

Travelling to reach my destination!

No matter how hazardous the trip proves to be,

I must move forward, conquering the fear in me!

I pass through infinite ways as I go

It’s for the last time as I won’t return!

As I complete the sixteenth year of voyage

I realise the true sense of my journey!

I lonely stand as a voyager on this sail-ship of life’ !!!

Driven against my will by the wind called ‘faith’ !!!

To my far away destination termed as ‘death’ !!!


                                                                         - Govind Krishnan ☺
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                           Hope you liked my poem. ☺☻☺☻☺
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Answered by TheRuhanikaDhawan
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NEVER GIVE UP , ITS LIFE
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Life is a sweet little  journey to go with

And there are many challenges to face in this journey of our life
There are many obstacles to deal with
We have to face them and should not give up in our entire life

We have to come across dreary mountains and forests
In which we have to battle out demons who will threaten us
Saying that we are less endowed with tooth and claws
We have to battle them out bravely and make the victory to be ours

Now its the to face the mighty ocean , the life giving water
The ocean says I am vast and i can swallow you up,dare you challenge me
We had to face many difficulties battling with our 'life' the water
Had met many sailors who sailed the way who decided to give up  
But I am a lone sailor ,nothing can dare me and I love challenges
There was water everywhere in the ocean but there was no water to drink 
Had to face mighty storms , sweet paths to end the voyage
As after every night there will be a day and after the brightness there will be darkness

Time to take on the greatest desert 
Sand sand everywhere but water water nowhere 
Desert says that it will burn us alive with its tremendous heat
But we are on the journey of life , cant just give up but we need to face them in style
I am not a frog in the well
We are here to be alive and not to be alive dead 
be the camel and keep going and dont let desert to burn you

Many things comes in life and goes
Be the lion while battling life and better not be the loser in it
Life will tech us many things , and we should learn from them
I am the lion ,the king in my entire journey , no one can question me
And finally live life to its fullest and never give up in life
If you give up , u will be the bird in the cage 

duragpalsingh: gr8
Nikki57: great answer
Nikki57: by a great person
Anonymous: You are right Nikki^_^ This answer is really great.
GovindKrishnan: Cool Poem! Mr.Nerd (^_^)
shreya1231: Great and lovely ans ..:)
Kimmus: Nailed it Plaq ^^
Anonymous: Wow! Cool!! ^ ^
TheRuhanikaDhawan: thanks :D
Anonymous: great
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