Write a short story ending with the line ‘This was the worst
nightmare I have ever had’
Or
Write a precise story in any way you like but end your story with
a character standing in the rain.
Or
‘The first rain of the season arrives’. Write a story that begins
immediately afterwards.
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Answer:
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Explanation:
Sometimes, when we sleep, we get images flashing across our minds. These images come as a result of our imagination which runs wild at night. If the series of images we see make us happy or confused, then they are dreams. On that same line, at the farthest end, there are nightmares. These series of images most often cause us fear, and sometimes, disappointment. As a growing mind, I have a fair number of both. But the worst of my nightmares would be the one in which I became an orphan.
It was day, probably two o’clock, when my nightmare began. My parents, brother and two sisters were all packed in a car, clad in casual wears. My boisterous siblings were busy prattling about what activities they would carry out at their destination. From their conversation, I picked up ‘Festival Mall’ as their destination. Suddenly, I had a prickling thought banging in my head. I tried recalling it, but it seemed to have shunted into the recesses of my psyche. I ignored the thought and turned back to their conversation. No sooner had I begun listening than the car veered to life and started the journey to Festival Mall.
In the car, my mum reminded my siblings about acting disciplined and not displaying the antics they often did at home, at the mall. Minutes floated past as I sat in the car listening to the conversations of my family members, not uttering a single word. As the view of the Mile 2 bridge appeared in front of us, I suddenly remembered the thought that had escaped me: the bridge was weak, and would collapse if more than 2000 tonnes rested on it. I looked around at the other vehicles. There were some lorries and trailers parked at the sides, some tankers and heavily-loaded buses, and, a few cars. I
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Angela's feedback:
"You come through on your stated purpose of telling the reader about the worst nightmare you’ve ever had, and you use many academic vocabulary words correctly in the work. However, your narrative loses its emotional effect at points because of your vocabulary use. Word choice issues include your use of “shunted” and “veered.” There are also misspelled terms such as “jgged” and “thig.” The sentences that begin “As a growing” and “There were some lorries” are especially awkward and should be recast for clarity. Your comma and semicolon use would both benefit from a review. For example, no comma should appear in the phrase “weak, and would.”"
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The first rain of the season arrives..
- The first rain of the season arrives and everyone of Barauli was filled with joy and love. Barauli, a small village in UP is untouched by the modernization and mechanisation. They use the traditional farming methods and depends on rain for irrigation. They believe that rain water is "boon" for the crops.
- Last year a young man name Rohan, resident of this village came from Delhi after persuing his degree in climatology and remote sensing. He studied climate very well and bought many equipment and few apps in his smartphone. After completion of his degree thought that he will first change mindset of the people of his village regarding technology.
- When he came whole village welcome him with open arms. He told all of them about climate, mechanism of monsoon etc. Everyone was listening to him like a wonder. A old man stand and told him that rain is gift of God. And no one should can predict when God showers his blessings.
- Rohan told him that he will predict the first rain of the season.
- After very hard word and placing equipment around his village, and with the help of internet. He predicted that the first shower of this season will be on 20th June. And this was the day.
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