write a story which begins with bitter disappointment in 450 words
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Transfer-Encoding: chunked Controlled assessment: Story- Disappointment Disappointment, that was Robert's life in a nutshell; he always found everything disappointing and everyone was always disappointed in him for some reason or another. As he got up, he looked in the mirror revealing his 5ft 6, 60kg body and short brown hair and eyes. Completely average. He pulled on his school uniform, a white shirt, black trousers and a black jumper and then walked downstairs. ?Happy 16th birthday!? Robert's mother cried. ?What?s so happy about it?? Robert remarked in his monotonous, depressing voice. ?I'm just another year closer to death and still none the wiser as to how to end this wretched boredom I find myself in? ?Come on Robert, not this again; you need to find a hobby, that'll end your boredom.? ?It's not as easy as that? He declared as he pulled a bowl out from a cupboard ?I just find everything... disappointing.? ?Robert, are you depressed because if that's the case I can take you to see a doctor or a psychiatrist. ...read more.
Middle
Robert was fond of the library, in the library he could read and therefore escape into a world that was more exciting than real life. A place that wasn't so... disappointing. As he walked toward the library he noticed a trench coat and beanie hat sporting individual with long, knotted hair and dirty, black boots across the road from him staring at Robert but he just assumed the man had mistaken him for another person as he walked off after getting a good look at Robert. Three hours later, Robert trudged his way home. Robert thought something was different at the library today, it was unusually... disappointing. While walking home a thought crossed Robert's mind. ?Who was the man in the trench coat? Why was he staring at me? He was staring far too long to just be wondering who I was? just as that thought crossed his mind he noticed the trench coat man staring at him from an alley. ...read more.
Conclusion
Then Robert leapt to his feet and kicked the psychopath over and over again. After about a minute Robert stopped and stared at the knife. As Robert grabbed the knife the psychopath plead ?pl... please don't kill me? ?You deserve it? replied Robert bitterly ?You... you wouldn't kill your father would you?? the psychopath coward. ?You aren't worthy of being my father, you beat Mother over and over again, you fiend!? ?Bu... but this is brutality? ?No, this is Karma!? Robert shouted as the lunged toward his father with the knife. As he plunged the knife into his father he felt something. Not disappointment. Bliss. After he pulled the knife out, his father went limp as blood spilled out of him forming a pool of dark blood. ?Must of hit his heart? Robert thought to himself as he began to walk home. As Robert walked off in a euphoric daze He'd forgotten about the blood he was losing from his fractured skull due to a blow to the head. Robert collapsed as he was weaving in and out and of consciousness he couldn't help but feel... disappointment. ...read more.
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