English, asked by iamthegreat21, 1 year ago

write a story withn 150 - 200 starting with -

"I was getting ready for my gym class at my locker. people were milling around me , asking me to hurry up . "

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Answered by Anonymous
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A DREADFUL REVENGE
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I was getting ready for my gym class at my locker. People were milling around me, asking me to hurry. That was the special day for me which I was waiting for months.

I was preparing for the swimming competition held in our gym at the national level. I was chosen as the coach of the Swimming team. But some my team members were jealous to me, they did not want to see me as a coach. But our head coach had a firm believe on me.

One glorious evening, one of the member of my team invited me in a party. I relied on her because I was well aware of her trustworthiness. I joined her for the party. But that was my biggest Fault. She just wanted to make me weaken so that I couldn't participate in the competition which was going to be held after 2 days. She offered me the drink which had a huge quantity of alcohol in it.

Next day, I found myself in a dizzying condition. I wasn't able to stand on my feet. I lost all hopes. I thought that now my world is gonna to be shattered. But after considering this issue, I called my sister. She handled me and consoled me. Because of her efforts, I got well. Though, I couldn't participate in the event but the judge's announced me as a National coach of swimming field.

Really, fortune favours the wise. And devilry cannot overrule angelic deeds.

unicornpinkheart0: do you know how to speak?
Anonymous: ??
unicornpinkheart0: "they did not wanted me to see me as couch"
unicornpinkheart0: its a good story but some better vocabulary would be nice]
Anonymous: It should be " want "
unicornpinkheart0: yes
unicornpinkheart0: other than the vocabulary I enjoyed it
iamthegreat21: the story is full of grammatical errors and the story line is also not so special
Answered by unicornpinkheart0
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I was getting ready for my gym class at my locker. People were milling me, asking me to hurry up, yelling, It was horrible. What!? It wasn’t my fault I was late! Well, here’s what happened, it was a beautiful morning and I was just getting up, I walked downstairs to have some coffee and some breakfast. When I got down my parents were rushing and I didn’t know why, I tried yelling but they were marking to much noise for me to even ask. I ran to my room and got my mega phone, when I walked in I yelled into it and it was like the whole world came to a hault. I looked around and saw nothing but mess, little Jimmy dropped his food, mom lost her purse, dad lost the keys to the car, Lily got stuck in the cabinet again, and someone locked Barry outside. I was wondering what I had missed and I was afraid to look at the time, I looked over my shoulder and saw that the time was 9:45. I rushed upstairs and heard everyone go back to rushing too. I quickly got dressed and threw my gym bag together, when I got downstairs I yelled as loud as I could, “EVERYONE OUTSIDE NOW!!!”, they all stopped and starred and ran out. We rushed out to the car and drove to gym class. It was the craziest morning of my life! Now that I think of it, it was my fault we were late, I’m supposed to wake everyone up on gym day.oops!

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iamthegreat21: what is the title ?
iamthegreat21: but still story line is good
unicornpinkheart0: The craziest morning EVER!!!
unicornpinkheart0: this is the title i've chosen, if you would like to change that's fine!
unicornpinkheart0: and thanks for the brainliest answer
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