write an imaginary description of the dream of hope
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hi everyone
I try to use some formal English and write an essay about my dream.
Could you help me to make it better?
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Everyone has wonderful hopes and dreams of their future. As a typical Virgo, I extremely desire everything be perfect, especially my future life. I want to be a successful woman in the future.
The meaning of success is quite different for everyone. For me, the first obvious thing is a good career. I hope I can run my own business and make it to be international in order to earn more money for myself and my family. As a result of being wealthy, I can obtain a higher life standard and it also makes me have the sense of personal achievement.
However, being successful is not only means to be rich. I firmly believe that liberty is vital importance of my life. Therefore, I am going to do want I want to do. I do not want to be too busy to spend time with families and friends. I need to enjoy my free time to have parties and family gatherings. Moreover, I am keen to learn different languages; I wish I can have enough time to learn new languages, which can help me to open my mind by communicating with people all over the world and to enrich my life.
Another consideration of being successful is a happy family. I deeply hope I can find my Mr. Right in the future. We will live in a big house with beautiful garden and swimming pool and filled with love. We can raise our children together and get older together. We can work hard during the day and travel around the world in vacation.
I strongly think all of these hopes are not a dream. I have the confidence to make these come true through my unremitting effort.