Question

Write the error along with its correction?
All things in a universe, including the
sun and the moon but the stars, obey
certain laws. Without this laws the world
would not go along for a single moment.
You, whose mission in life was service of
his fellowmen, will go to pieces if you
are not under discipline.​

Answer 1

Answer:

things in a universe, including the

sun and the moon but the stars, obey

certain laws. Without these laws, the world

would not go along for a single moment.

You, whose mission in life was the service of

his fellowmen, will go to pieces if you

are not under discipline.

Answer 2

All things in the universe, including the

sun and the moon and the stars, obey

certain laws. Without these laws, the world

would not go on for a single moment.

You, whose mission in life is service of

your fellowmen will go to pieces if you

are not disciplined.

Explanation:

• In the first sentence, the article is used incorrectly. The definite article 'the' will be used.
• In the second sentence, the incorrect conjunction has been used. The correct conjunction will be 'and'.
• In the third sentence, the pronoun agreement has been written incorrectly. The correct pronoun will be 'these'.
• In the fourth sentence, the preposition has been used incorrectly. The correct preposition will be 'on' instead of 'along'.
• In the fifth sentence, the auxiliary verb will be 'is' instead of 'was'.
• In the sixth sentence, the pronoun used will be 'your' and not 'his'.
• In the seventh sentence, the verb used will be 'disciplined.'

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