Question

your school children have responded to the crisis of orissa. orissa cyclone victims children of your class collected 42blankets to be sent to the cyclone effected people of orissa if function held off your school yesterday the hm of your school hand over the pakages to the president of Vijayawada branch of red Cross society now write news report on school children mobilization aid for cyclone victims

Answer 1

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