(1)editing error
a) children hardly gets time to
b) read story books. In the few time
c )they get after finish the homework,
d) what all they wants to do
e) is watch the cartoons or plays
f) video games these days. The another
g) is that there is a greatly pressure
h) upon them to perform or excel.
i )The situation is no best among colledge
student.
Answers
* gets. get
* the few a few
* finish. finishing
* wants want
* watch watching
* another. one more
* greatly. great
* upon. on
* no not
Answer:
Children hardly get time to read story books. In the little time they get after finishing the homework, what all they want to do is watch cartoons and play video games these days. The other is that there is a great pressure on them to perform and excel. The situation is no good among college students.
Explanation:
This paragraph showcases the problems that are dealt by every student who goes to school or college.
Here in (a). "gets" is changed to get because gets is used with third person noun. Same goes with the word in (d), "wants" changed to "want" as well as the word in (e), that is "plays" changed to "play".
In (b), "few" is changed to little. In (f), "another" is changed to other and (g), "greatly" is changed to "great", in (h) the word "upon" changed to "on" and word "or" is changed to "and" because both perform and excel are related. In (i), "best" is changed to "good".
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