Question

a paragraph about smart phone

Answer 1

Nowadays, smartphones have many advantages (better: There are many advantages in having a smartphone). You can do anything (many things) with smartphones (a smartphone), for examples, pay (paying) bills of electricity (electrical bills) or buy (buying) something on the internet (Internet) from (using) the phone’s browser. You can study everywhere with smartphones (a smartphone) if you upload (uploaded) your data to the internet (Internet). In addition, smartphone (smartphones) also have dictionary applications which you can use to looking (look) for others (delete: others) words when you are learning foreign languages. Furthermore, you don’t need (add: to) worry if you (add: are) lost the way (delete: the way) when you are travelling, because smartphones are allowed (allow) you (add: to) find out (delete: out) the way with maps applications (a map application). Overall, smartphones is (are) really useful for people with many advantages (ambiguous. Did you mean smartphone with many advantages or people with many advantages? Delete “with many advantages”).

Answer 2

A smartphone is a cellular telephone with an integrated computer and other features not originally associated with telephones, such as an operating system, web browsing and the ability to run software applications.