Question

Anaya was youngest in her family.she was very closed to her elder brother,Hamad. She played with him. She went to school with him
Hamad also took care of her. Both enjoyed a lot with each other.Anaya was not good in English subject. Her brother taught her English. Once, Anaya got angry with her brother and decided to leave home. She packed her bag and did not tell any one in family about her adventure. She started roaming here and there. Soon she realized that she lost her home. She started missing her brother and home. She had no information to go back home. All her family member worried at home.They search her in all direction. Her brother was very sad. He went out for looking her and searched her every where. Finally he found her. As soon he saw her sister sitting on bench, he ran to her. Anaya also felt pleasure ,ran toward her brother and hugged him tightly.









Plzzzzz tell is that story of mine is correct according to English grammer rule,,, if not plzzz modify it

Answer 1

Answer:

she used to play with him...

she used to go scholl with him

she has lost her way

all family member were worried at home

as soon as he saw his sister

now its perfect....

Answer 2

Answer:

correct because it's not a good manner to leave home