Hindi, asked by Angel291, 1 year ago

Anuched likheye jab Mai ghar Mai akeli thi

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Answered by devansi
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                            JAB MEIN GHAR MAI AKELI THI
ISI SHANIVAAR KI BAAT HAI............ GHAR KE SABHI SADASYA KISI SAMBANDHI KE SHAADI MEIN GAYE THE. AUR MEIN APNE PARIKSHYA KE  KARAN SHAADI MEIN NAHI JAA PAYII.TOH USS DIN ME GHAR MEIN AKELI THI AUR USS DIN TOOFAN JAISE HAWAEIN BHI CHAL RAHI THI. MEIN USS RAAT BAHUT DARR GAYEE THI.UPER SE MERE GHARWALE BHI BAHUT DERR RAAT TAK NAHI AYE THE.ME ITNI DARR GAYEEE THI KI USS DIN ME KUCH KHANA BHI NAI KHAEE THIPURE GHAR ME SIRF AKELE MEIN HI THI AUR GHAR MEIN KAHIN CHOR NA GHUUSH JAYE ISH BAAT KA DARR LAGAYE RAHATA THA PER MEIN BADII HI SAHAS KE SAATH WO RAAT GUJARII THI............USS RAAT KE BAAD SE MEIN PHIR KAABHI BHI  AKELI NAI RAHI THI.

Angel291: not so good as I hope the starting is good but the ending is not good u should make it funny like that I have heard a sound coming from kitchen I go and see there was a cat
Angel291: u should do like this
devansi: this was a common incident so have written like this....
devansi: why should i wil add a climax in an anuchhed
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