English, asked by 2003varunp, 11 months ago

Can someone please grade me on this essay? Topic : You arrived home late in the evening from a family function, to find that some
people from your neighbourhood have surrounded your next-door neighbours
house. Describe what you discovered. How did you and your family react ?

Please grade me according to 10th ICSE Board.

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Answered by gparasuram606
5

its good you will be able to get more marks . but always try not to mention the time . say early in the evening , late at night etc


2003varunp: It's out of 20 marks. So, how much will I get?
gparasuram606: for 20 marks you may get 16-18 to get more you need to write more
gparasuram606: please mark this as brainliest
Answered by meghanap
0
oh !! its good !!!sentence formation is also perfect ! :

morsclue: actually its written in a casual way. REMINDER NEVER WRITE AN ESSAY INFORMALLY. he had to use complex words and sentence formation. never write like your talking to someone. writing and talking is completely different.
meghanap: ya u r absolutely correct
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