Question

Chart of information about the number of social networking sites people used in canada in 2014 and 2015

Answer 1

Answer:

Sample: 1:

The bar charts represents the percentage of people in Canada using multiple social networking sites for two years including 2014 and 2015.

Overall, about one fifth people living in Canada uses no social networking sites, whereas, approximately 30% Canadians of the total population uses one social networking site in the year 2014 and 2015.

The percentage of people using no social sites decreased insignificantly in 2015. However, 36% of Canadians used one social networking sites in 2014 and the number decreased in 2015 making approximately one third of the total population.

In 2014, 23% people used two sites for social networking, which was increased a little bit in 2015 making about one fourth of the total population. The number of people using three sites increased by 4% in 2015, which constituted 16%. Very few people used four sites in 2014 for social networking, which slightly increased in 2015 making only 8%. Only 2% Canadians used five sites for social networking which was increased by only 2% in the year 2015.

Minutes took: 27 mins/ try to finish by 18 minutes, keep 2 minutes for revision:

Feedback: Score 7:

There are minor grammatical mistakes like subject verb agreement, passive voice,

Instead of present form write past as this report is for 2014 & 2015.

Sample: 2:

The bar chart depicts how different the number of social networking sites’ usage of people is in Canada between the years 2014 and 2015. Overall, it has been observed that people have more tendency to use more than one social networking site in 2015 than 2014.

At the beginning of the period,i.e., in 2014 more than half of the population, 58% to be precise, used either one or no social networking sites whereas it fell sharply in 2015 to 49%. In 2015, people’s habit of using social networking sites increased with more than 50% of the people using two or more sites. However, in both the years, the highest percentage of people were inclined to use only one networking site.