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Could you check my essay? Please check and correct the grammar and mistakes
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Volunteer work has both advantages and disadvantages. And only the specialist who is looking for a job can estimate for himself the necessity of working as a volunteer.

The most important advantage of volunteer work is gaining experience. Any skills will come in handy in life, from simple domestic to professional ones. New acquaintances, connections, which in the future can be useful to you. A lot of new knowledge, you are constantly improving and learning new things.

Every volunteer gets a chance to assess their abilities. Participating in various events and promotions, you can determine what is close to you, most like it. Each person is individual, someone likes to help in carrying out activities and in the future it becomes a good organizer. Many volunteers like working with children, spending festive and entertaining activities for them.

In addition to the clear advantages, there are also disadvantages.
Fear not to get what you expect
There is the likelihood that the work of the volunteer will not justify the hopes that were placed on it. Sometimes it depends on the volunteer, who incorrectly set himself the tasks and goals in acquiring the desired work in the specialty. It is difficult for a volunteer to foresee how relations with superiors and colleagues will work out.

Unwillingness to work without getting anything in return
Many people judge volunteering as unnecessary that does not give anything. While volunteer work can be emotionally rewarding, you're not receiving any monetary compensation for your time. In some cases, you may even end up spending money when you volunteer.

In my opinion volunteering this is an excellent chance for young people to expand their knowledge in many areas that volunteer activity, but it's your choice. No one forced you to go somewhere and work there, wasting your time.


Equestriadash: Hi, there were some spelling and grammar mistakes, I have corrected it.
Equestriadash: Volunteer work has both advantages and disadvantages. And only the specialist who is looking for a job can estimate for himself the necessity of working as a volunteer.
The most important advantage of volunteer work is gaining experience. Any skills will come in handy in life, from simple domestic to professional ones. New acquaintances, connections, which in the future can be useful to you. A lot of new knowledge, you are constantly improving and learning new things.
Equestriadash: Every volunteer gets a chance to assess their abilities. Participating in various events and promotions, you can determine what is close to you, almost like it. Each person is an individual, someone likes to help in carrying out activities and in the future, it becomes a good organizer. Many volunteers like working with children, spending festive and entertaining activities for them.

In addition to the clear advantages, there are also disadvantages.
Fear not to get what you expect
Equestriadash: There is the likelihood that the work of the volunteer will not justify the hopes that were placed on it. Sometimes it depends on the volunteer, who incorrectly set himself the tasks and goals in acquiring the desired work in the speciality. It is difficult for a volunteer to foresee how relations with superiors and colleagues will work out.

Unwillingness to work without getting anything in return
Equestriadash: Many people judge volunteering as unnecessary that does not give anything. While volunteer work can be emotionally rewarding, you're not receiving any monetary compensation for your time. In some cases, you may even end up spending money when you volunteer.

In my opinion volunteering, this is an excellent chance for young people to expand their knowledge in many areas that volunteer activity, but it's your choice. No one forced you to go somewhere and work there, wasting your time.
Equestriadash: Hope you find it ok now.
monika223313: Thank you))
Equestriadash: Your Welcome!
Equestriadash: I would advise you to use the Grammarly App.

Answers

Answered by Sauron
1
i think it's correct and perfect
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Answered by Anonymous
1
♠ ANSWER :

ERRORS

1). Volunteer = volunteer 's

2). Any = Many

3). Ones = one

4). In handy = handy ( in ×)

5). It becomes = he becomes

6). Spending festive ×

7). Set = sets

8).( an) unnecessary

9). Does not = would not

10). You ? Volunteer

11). Volunteering ( This ×)

12 ). Areas that = areas than
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