Question

does this sound like a good onomatopoeia poem

My onomatopoeia poem
by Matthew Jana

The strange noise

Bang bang
What was that
I do not know
Bang bang creek creek
What was that
I keep on hearing strange noises
Bang bang creek creek buzz buzz
Who’s there
I'm scared
Bang bang creek creek buzz buzz bing bong
Someone turn on that light
Does anyone else hear those noises
No
Of course not
Well i do
Bang bang creek creek buzz buzz bing bong boom boom
Oh do you mean that noise
Yes i do
Yes we hear it
We are going to be in trouble if mom and dad find out that noise
Bang bang creek creek buzz buzz bing bong boom boom crackle crackle
I am going to hide
Why you to scared
Yes i am
We will turn on that light
Oh it is just the popcorn machine
I don't think it is is it a fire
Yes it is get out of the house
I will call 911
And then they never heard those strange noises ever again

The end

Answer 1

yes it does sound like that