Edit the following passage. What we do get from this? The chance to slip away from a while for everydayness, to still the monotony of the commute, to listen more closely and carefully on musics that can lift you and can keep you go.
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Edit the following passage.
What we do get from this? The chance to slip away from a while for
everydayness, to still the monotony of the commute, to listen more closely
and carefully on musics that can lift you and can keep you go
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"What do we get from this? The chance to slip away for a while from everydayness , to give your lives their own sound tracks, to still the monotony of the commute, to listen more closely and carefully to music that can lift you up and can keep you going."
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This is an excerpt from 'is society dead'. There were four mistakes in the original passage which have been corrected in the answer
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