Question

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When I turned the doorknob, it open easy. I was immediately spicious; the door should of been
locked on a weekend at midnight. I was carefully push the door open. It was pitch black inside. I
couldn't even see my own hand on the doorknob. I heard a low growl and felt something brushed
past me. What was it? A tiger...a lion...a wild beast? "There he is said Mr. O'Malley, owner of the
building. "Come on, Butchy," he called to the dog. "Time to go home." Mr. O'Malley looked at me
for a moment. Then he said "I know, I know. I shouldn't had left the door open. I came back to lock
it - and to find Butchy."​

Answer 1

Explanation:

When I turned the doorknob, it open easy. I was immediately suspicious; the door should of been

locked on a weekend at midnight. I was carefully push the door open. It was pitch black inside. I

couldn't even see my own hand on the doorknob. I heard a low growl and felt something brushed

past me. What was it? A tiger...a lion...a wild beast? "There he is said Mr. O'Malley, owner of the

building. "Come on, Butchy," he called to the dog. "Time to go home." Mr. O'Malley looked at me

for a moment. Then he said "I know, I know. I shouldn't had left the door open. I came back to lock

it - and to find Butchy."​

Explanation:

well done

 

Answer 2

Answer:

When I turned the doorknob, it opened easily. I was immediately suspicious; the door should have been

locked on a weekend at midnight. I carefully pushed the door open. It was pitch black inside. I

couldn't even see my own hand on the doorknob. I heard a low growl and felt something brushed

past me. What was it? A tiger...a lion...a wild beast? "There he is", said Mr. O'Malley, owner of the

building. "Come on, Butchy," he called to the dog. "Time to go home." Mr. O'Malley looked at me

for a moment. Then he said "I know, I know. I shouldn't have left the door open. I came back to lock

it - and to find Butchy."