Question

Edit this paragraph
Commonwealth gold in medalist Heena Sidhu used to watch it's uncle repair each kinds of guns in her neighborhood and develop a fancy for it.
And in 2006 where she took ushooting her family member did not think she should win Laurels from her country

Answer 1

Its become Her
Repair becomes Reparing
Each become many
Develop becomes makes

Answer 2

Commonwealth gold medalist Heena Sidhu used to watch her uncle repair all kinds of guns in her neighborhood and developed a fancy for them. And in 2006, when she took up shooting, her family members didn’t think she would win laurels for her country.

Explanation:

• The first error is in the use of the correct pronoun. The noun is 'Heena Sidhu' for whom the pronoun used will be 'her'.
• The second error is in the correct use of pronouns. The correct pronoun will be 'all' and not 'each'.
• The third error is in the use of tense.
• The past form 'developed' will be the correct tense.
• The fourth error is in the use of the correct pronoun. Instead of 'it', 'them' will be used.
• The fifth error is in the use of interrogative conjunction. Instead of 'where', 'when' will be used.
• The sixth error is in the use of a modal auxiliary. 'Would' will be used.
• The seventh error is in the use of the preposition. 'For' will be used.

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