Question

edit this passage refer to pic

Answer 1

1 line ,
instead of 'has been' there should be 'was'
2 line,
instead of 'complete' it should be 'completed'
3 line,
instead of 'if is' it should be 'it was'
4 line,
instead of come it should be came
5 line,
instead of will it should be would
6 line,
instead of shall it should be will
7 line,
instead of would it should be it would have
8 line,
instead of has to be check it should was to be checked
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