editing .the demands of growing up and succeeding has resulted in children be subjected to a lot of pressure at an early stages .that often leads to irregular eating habits ,subsequent resulting in poor health .adults to deal by deadlines,pollution , stress ,diseases and the pressure of balancing both personal or professional lives.all this takes the toll on our and bodies
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The demands of growing up and succeeding has resulted in children being subjected to a lot of pressure at an early stage, that often leads to irregular eating habits, subsequently resulting in poor health .Adults too deal with deadlines, pollution , stress ,diseases and the pressure of balancing both personal and professional lives. All this takes a toll on our bodies.
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2. Verb- be subjected to has been changed to. being subjected to
3. Singular-plural consistency- an early stages has been changed to an early stage.
4. Adverb- Subsequent has been changed to subsequently.
5. Incorrect word usage- Adults to has been changed to adults too.
6. Incorrect conjunction usage- personal or professional lives has been changed to personal and professional lives.
7. Unnecessary conjunction and removed from the last line.
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