Question

find fault in the story writing

Answer 1

• No title

•In third para the phrase "all crowd" won't come. it'll be the crowd

• In the last para the phrase "on earth" is not needed
• In the last para it's moment not movement

That's it

Answer 2

1. it was too perilous .....not 'so'

2. suddenly, the whole sky....

3.the whole atmosphere rumble .....u dont need to add 'was'

4.The crowd and not 'all' crowd.

5.and this news was printed in the newspaper .....not 'the' news

6. The child's mother was very happy ( the whole sentence is wrong what u have written )

7. remove the 'And' in and I saw God in the cloud.

8. it's not movement it is moment