Question

Find my grammetical mistakes in the following paragraph


I think of adding some lines in my post but i cant edit it so I thought of reposting it I am sorry as it might not be a question to ask but i think it is a very important part of our education

Hey everyone,
specially the students of 10 and 12 classes.i knew many of u are very much tensed so i thought of posting it . i knew that u all are putting yours maximum effort in ur preparation don't think of the result it is not in our hand the thing which is in our hand is practice do it without careing about the result. Don't think my syllabus is not completed how will i do it . just think u can Do ANYTHING U WANT TO DO .NOTHING IS IMPOSSIBLE FOR U .U ARE BORN TO BE A WINNER U WILL ACHIVE IT . U WILL DO IT AS U ARE THE BEST PERSON IN THIS WORLD . and if u fail then also it is for some reason then what if u failed .failure are the stepping stones towards the success . remember u can do each and every thing and life gives us many opportunities for it . It is not the end its the begining . and enjoy ur life as human life is the beat gift given to u by god . if ur life is not going well . just knew it that life has 2 parts one best and other worst . if u have lived the worst part of life the best part of life is just in its way . so beat of luck for ur exarms . no matters what the result is. If u have put ur full efforts in studies u will definetly get its reault one day . remember MARKS DONT MATTER AT ALL. Sorry for my poor English
And one more thing trying and failing in it is not a lossing but not thing it is loosing . So put ur max effort and win this race or get prep for another race in which u will win ttry try and try tool ur GOAL is reached.

One more thing I know u all will become best entipenures in future . I might need ur help that time when u will be earning a huge amount . Just plze help me at that time. If I asked for the help

And plze comment and let me know about it and how many people I inspired to do something.

Answer 1

here is what I corrected of urs 
Hey everyone,
especially the students of 10 and 12 classes I knew many of u are very much tensed so I thought of posting this. I knew that you all are putting your maximum effort in your preparation don't think of the result it is not in our hands. The thing which is in our hand is practice. do it without caring about the result. Don't think my syllabus is not completed how will i do it . just think u can Do ANYTHING U WANT TO DO .NOTHING IS IMPOSSIBLE FOR U .U ARE BORN TO BE A WINNER U WILL ACHIEVE IT. U WILL DO IT AS U ARE THE BEST PERSON IN THIS WORLD . and if u fail then also it is for some reason then what if u failed .failure are the stepping stones towards the success. remember u can do each and everything and life gives us many opportunities for it. It is not the end its the beginning . and enjoy your life as human life is the best gift given to u by god. if ur life is not going well . just knew it that life has 2 parts one best and other worst. if u have lived the worst part of life the best part of life is just in its way. so best of luck for ur exams. no matters what the result is. If u have put ur full efforts in studies u will definitely get its result one day. remember MARKS DONT MATTER AT ALL. Sorry for my poor English
And one more thing trying and failing in it is not a loss but not thing it is loosing. So put ur max effort and win this race or get prep for another race in which u will wintry and try tool ur GOAL is reached.

One more thing I know u all will become best entipenures in future. I might need ur help that time when u will be earning a huge amount. Just plz help me at that time. If I asked for the help